I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Emily.You have made it hard for me to work out which one is a lie.I know you have a sister but did she get married!I am going to go with the first story about you and your sister Amelia.I think that this one is a lie.Did I guess right?
hi Emily it sows like your had a lot of fan in the Holiday. from Jessica
ReplyDeleteWell done Emily. Very interesting ideas. I love the way you have added detail, and made your writing interesting. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Emily.You have made it hard for me to work out which one is a lie.I know you have a sister but did she get married!I am going to go with the first story about you and your sister Amelia.I think that this one is a lie.Did I guess right?
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