Hello today i'm going to share my writing about how i was feeling coming back to school this is what our teacher told us to write about. This is my first draft of writing take a look.
Thanks for looking at my writing. is there any thing i can improve? Bye!
Hi Emily,like feeling how you were feeling a little sleepy and happy and excited at the same time. good job on working on your story and great job on feeling excited. next time you writ some more you might feel happy.
ReplyDeleteHello Emily.
ReplyDeleteI don't think much got done in the first week back at school,as it gave the children some time to settle back into class...but now that we are all back..YEHAAAA.
What did you miss most about school?.
Hello Emily.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Emily.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.