I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers today i will be showing you my recount writing we have been doing in writing in room 11.We had to write about something that happened in the past here is my writing.
hi emily I like your writing it was realy long. it reminded me wene I ent to castl hills. you could use the speach things wene there talking. wich year did this happen.
hi emily I like your writing it was realy long. it reminded me wene I ent to castl hills. you could use the speach things wene there talking. wich year did this happen.
ReplyDeleteHi Laura it happened this years thanks for asking.
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