I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today I will be showing you my mad hatter writing. We had to do a slide show and describe him and what he looks like here is a picture of my mad hatter slide.
WOW Emily.Your describing words really made you work POP! I really like the word that described his eyebrows.I might have to use that description next time I write a story.
WOW Emily.Your describing words really made you work POP!
ReplyDeleteI really like the word that described his eyebrows.I might have to use that description next time I write a story.