This term we have been learning to write narrative stories. The purpose of a narrative is to entertain the reader to get them to keep reading your story. First we had to create a planner on a google doc. Then we had to write in our beginning problem / buildup event which is the middle and our end. We had to include similes, onomatopoeia, dialog, personification, paragraphs and describing words. One of my favourite sentences is Ella could hear the baby reindeer trotting in the crunchy white snow. One thing I think I could improve on is adding less describing words and sentences at the top of my paragraphs.
Thank you for reading my blog post and story. Please leave a comment. Ciao.
WOW Emily-you have a very good writing ability.Your use of words made me read on and I was disappointed that the story ended.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great imagination.Thank you for writing an intriguing story and I look forward to your next post.
Keep warm.
Hola Mrs Cassidy,
DeleteThank you for reading my story I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are having a great first day back at school. Bye.