I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I definitely agree with the message of your poem. It certainly has been hot in Auckland this week! Has it been hot where you live? Your poem was also a great reminder to drink some water!
Getting the syllables right can be tricky! Writing them down next to each line is a good idea. Sometimes I like to clap as I say the words to check the syllables. Have you tried this before?
Kia ora Emily,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your haiku!
I definitely agree with the message of your poem. It certainly has been hot in Auckland this week! Has it been hot where you live? Your poem was also a great reminder to drink some water!
Getting the syllables right can be tricky! Writing them down next to each line is a good idea. Sometimes I like to clap as I say the words to check the syllables. Have you tried this before?
I look forward to seeing more of your posts!
Charlotte (SLJ)