Today I will be sharing with you my tree house descriptive writing with the 5 scenes here is my writing.
One late night Ashleigh took a walk through the quiet and peaceful forest in the forest Ashliegh smelt an unusual smell like rotten fruit or sticky tree sap. Ashliegh could see everything around her but she couldn't tell where she was going. Then she heard a branch snap, all the birds and bats flew out from among the top of the tall trees. Ashliegh got a fright then she started to move hurriedly she saw an old abandoned looking treehouse. Ashliegh ran over and started to climb the ladder. The ladder started to creak. She got worried and started to let go but she held herself tight to the ladder and climbed faster than she ever had. She had finally made it to the top. It was so dusty she started to cough and was getting a really bad chest pain. Ashliegh felt the rickety wooden planks getting loose, she could hear the wind blowing hard, the taste of her mouth was dry and lumpy. Ashliegh could feel the dry air among herself. Ashliegh didn't know what to do everything was silent she saw the green shady trees surrounding her in the hollow forest Ashliegh heard what sounded like wolves howling to the full blue moon Ashliegh could feel the ground shaking all of a sudden the rain started pouring hard the rain smashed to the ground hitting the soil Ashliegh ran she took every path she saw to try get out suddenly the rain stopped Ashleigh could see the soaking wet tree’s Ashliegh’s clothes felt soggy and wet she felt heavy and sick she took the last path she saw and eventually that was the way out she had finally made it home she could smell the soft sizzle of the burning sausages of the BBQ nearby and the sound of the wind in her hair.
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