The Present Story

Hello here is the present story we have been writing about in Room 11 i hope you enjoy it. 

In a small house after school in a gloomy dark living room a boy was playing a shooting game BANG, BA, BANG the light of the T.V was flashing in his eyes. Mum came in the house she said “sorry sweetie I got home so late i had to pick up something after work”Mum put down a cardboard box on the coffee table “mum the boy said quietly .the boy looked at the box but he was to engrossed in his video game he did not care about anything else but his .Mum said ”why don’t you let some sun inside”said mum. Why don’t you open the present I got for you” For me” the boy said”. Then mum got a phone call.”Ring ring ring ring”sir i don’t no why you didn't get the papers ". The boy opened the unsealed  cardboard box. It was a puppy ”WHOA COOL!” but  the boy saw that the puppy only had three legs so he threw the small puppy away and said “GET LOST” “you gotta be kidding me” the boy said as he pushed the box off the table. The puppy saw a Rosie red ball under a draw in the living room. The puppy ran with little lightning speed  into the draw and bumped his head but then he went under the draw and grabbed the red shiny ball. The cute little puppy played with the ball and ran up to the boy. The puppy wanted to play a game with the boy.So the puppy ran up to the boy and put the ball down in front of him.The boy picked the red ball up with his little razzer teeth and put it in his pocket.so the got up the puppy saw that the boy only had one leg the puppy looked a bit confused as the boy picked up his crutches so the boy stood up and went outside to play the boy yelled out to his mum and said we’ll be outside so the boy and the puppy went outside and played fetch.